Varun's response is lengthy and primarily focused on technical details related to his current role in IT, which is not relevant to the marketing position he is applying for. He fails to connect his experience to the marketing field, which is crucial for the role of Marketing Specialist. The benchmark response effectively highlights relevant experience and personal interests that align with the job. Varun should have focused on his marketing experience, emphasizing skills and achievements in that domain while briefly mentioning personal interests that relate to creativity or communication. For improvement, he could say, "I am a marketing professional with over six years of experience in digital marketing and sales enablement. I have led various marketing campaigns and have a passion for storytelling and brand development. Outside of work, I enjoy cooking and exploring new cuisines."