Ajay's response includes relevant details about his experience with cross-functional teams and communicating with non-technical stakeholders. However, the response could benefit from clearer examples of how he simplified technical concepts and the specific strategies used to ensure understanding. Ajay could improve by incorporating strategies such as simplifying jargon, using analogies, employing visual aids, and summarizing key points, as mentioned in the benchmark response. Additionally, focusing on the outcome of these communications and their impact on project success would provide a more complete answer.